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Haunted Dreams

Running through my crowded mind
A memory thats not so kind
The nightmare that stares back in time
My haunted dreams

It will haunt me in my deadly dreams
Those who are like you and me
I have a fear to close my eyes
He's haunting me

Trapped inside a tight square room
The door is locked
I know im doomed
I hear his steps, still frozen, shocked
Hes haunting me

Nowhere to run
Im trapped inside
I find a gun
Point it in my mind
He glares at me
Those haunting eyes
It was only a dream.
          by Alexandra (not tellin  my last name:P)
p.s if anyone copys my work i will sue you. no jokes
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please do not take my poetry to literal. its all metaphorical. and keep in mind im a generaly happy person :)

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I really like the concept of this poem. It's very well written and really produces a wonderfully illustrated picture in one's mind. The first two lines, where they rhymed and the others didn't, kinda set it off, but other then that, this is a wonderful poem!

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generaly?

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the anatogonist makes the protagonist stronger
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i am a happy person in the sence that i am always happy exept for when people mess with me. then im not so nice anymore. anyways the only thing that can really tic me off would be to copy my work :P
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yes

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the anatogonist makes the protagonist stronger

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